VinMechaSamurai
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Join date : 2009-01-13
Age : 41
Location : Ohio
 |  Subject: First song i have ever wrote. Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:47 pm | |
| Let me know what you think.
Life Is A Canvas
(Verse 1)
Many colors on the human canvas reflect the ebbing change of all our lives.
Some paint with an ivory handled paint brush some with the steely sharpness of a knife.
Crimson spatters for the wars we wage yellow flourishes for the happiness inside.
We all hold the spectrum of emotional colors on the pallets of our soul.
We paint our experiences as we follow our ever winding paths in life.
(Chorus)
So take your brush and live your life.
Don’t fear the ever present shadow of failure.
No matter how bad you think your work looks.
It is always art in someone’s eyes.
(Verse 2)
The snow white canvas of a new born child soon shows the brush strokes of their years.
We all add to our ever growing canvas over the years we live on this spinning earth.
If you never take a chance to spread your wings your canvas may end up dull and gray.
Take a chance and follow your ambitions you never know how high you can fly.
Regret nothing and cherish everything even the dark clouds may hold a hidden light.
(Chorus)
So take your brush and live your life.
Don’t fear the ever present shadow of failure.
No matter how bad you think your work looks.
It is always art in someone’s eyes. | |
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CaptainNapkins
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Posts : 19
Join date : 2009-01-12
Location : Vegas
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Wed Jan 14, 2009 2:23 am | |
| I decided to sing it to get an idea of how it sounded. It's nice, I really like it. | |
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VinMechaSamurai
Helpful Soul
Posts : 21
Join date : 2009-01-13
Age : 41
Location : Ohio
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:11 am | |
| Thank you. I am glad you liked it. | |
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SevenYears
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Age : 35
Location : Canada
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:54 am | |
| I like the canvas theme.
I like your lyrics! | |
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VinMechaSamurai
Helpful Soul
Posts : 21
Join date : 2009-01-13
Age : 41
Location : Ohio
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:55 am | |
| Thank you. I just wish I was talented enough to put music to it. lol | |
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Kegelapan
Strong Soul
Posts : 99
Join date : 2009-02-14
Age : 30
Location : Winnipeg
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:17 pm | |
| Very interesting lyrics, i wrote a few pieces myself if you want i can post them | |
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thelovedoctor
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Join date : 2009-01-25
Age : 31
Location : Alberta, Canada
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:56 pm | |
| i can't read straight lyrics. I know you had you some type of tune in your head when you were writing these.
was this supposed to be Rap, classic rock, rock N roll, heavy metal, country, screamo, punk, techno. Give me something to work with | |
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Safehaven
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Join date : 2009-01-12
Age : 33
Location : a place called somewhere
| | Subject: Re: First song i have ever wrote. Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:28 pm | |
| I like it, its like a poem only with an unknown tune | |
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