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furball006
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PostSubject: a poem thing i wrote   a poem thing i wrote EmptyFri Jan 16, 2009 1:09 am

hey i wrote this poem thing i wanted to share...

hidden in rhymes


with a careful eye, we move mankind/
no honor paid, to what we left behind/
no respect for truth, or virtues left/
contaminated cities, our souls bereft/

watch a square box as if it contains lifes answer/
tonight at six, ten new types of cancer/
with the side order of terror you've been waiting to hear/
divide, conquer, distract and fear/

the ridiculous reveered and the truth ridiculed/
the wise are shunned while the sheep stay fooled/
left brain mentalities and analytical minds/
your bodies and souls, invisible binds/

place your faith in god and don't mind what I do/
maybe one day your prayers will come true/
if I come knocking then what will you do?/
another person locked in a cell/
realised earth is both heaven and hell/
which side am I on? you're too muddled to tell/

so watch my right hand while I make plans with the left/
my terms and conditions may result in your death/
confusion and ignorance is a sign of the times/
the true nature of life, hidden in rhymes


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Dave
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PostSubject: Re: a poem thing i wrote   a poem thing i wrote EmptyFri Jan 16, 2009 1:21 am

Great stuff! Love the first verse. It instantly captured my attention. Thanks for sharing and keep it up! Very Happy
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VinMechaSamurai
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PostSubject: Re: a poem thing i wrote   a poem thing i wrote EmptyFri Jan 16, 2009 11:28 pm

Very well done. Keep them comin.
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